writing week 6

 This week for writing a writing about what we see in pictures in how are you and describe it and how did they feel.

this writing was really fun because we got to see different sports and help people do them and how they feel about competitions.

what sport would have you picked to describe?

Doctors play

 this week's writing was all about the different jobs that people do here is the writing I did about being a doctor.

Nurse, can you give me the forceps please.
Hmmm there is a chunk of bone missing.
What do we do Dr Liam.
Let's give him a new clean bone.
That's a good idea Dr Liam.
Dr Liam the man woke up and he said that he's sore but he feels much better.
good now we have to work on another case.
Ok Dr Liam
Let's do it.
                                         the end

this was really funny cos I got to work with her partner and I got to see all the different jobs that people do around the world.

what do you want to be when you grow up?

summer poem

summer poem today I did some writing about summer it's a five senses poem I see I smell I feel I taste and I hear.

it wasn't really fun thinking of ideas about summer.

what do you do in summer?

summer

we are learning to use descriptive words instead of plane words.

Summer

I see the hot sun shining on the beach.

I hear children laughing and playing.

I smell the sea crashing on the soft sand.

I taste the rich creamy ice cream.

I feel the soft squishy sand in between my toes.

By Liam 

it was really fun coming up with these sentences. have you done a summer poem like this ?