we are learning to use descriptive words instead of plane words.
Summer
I see the hot sun shining on the beach.
I hear children laughing and playing.
I smell the sea crashing on the soft sand.
I taste the rich creamy ice cream.
I feel the soft squishy sand in between my toes.
By Liam
it was really fun coming up with these sentences. have you done a summer poem like this ?
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