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Friday, June 11, 2021

writing week 6

 This week for writing a writing about what we see in pictures in how are you and describe it and how did they feel.



this writing was really fun because we got to see different sports and help people do them and how they feel about competitions.


what sport would have you picked to describe?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Liam, I liked that you included the gymnasts thoughts and feelings in your writing. Remember to reread your work and make sure you use capital letters and full stops.

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