Hi Liam, Thanks for sharing your pepeha and memories writing. You were using the senses to give me a picture in my mind, especially the sense of touch/feeling. I remember getting itchy when I roll in the grass and getting brain freeze when drinking a cold drink. That's what great authors do - use the senses to help connect to a memory.
You asked what my memory is... my favouirte colour is orange. Orange reminds me of a flickering fire. When I visited family in England, it was snowing outside. We boiled a kettle on top of the black, metal fire box. Then we sat around the warm, crackling fire, drinking cups of steaming hot tea.
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Hi Liam,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your pepeha and memories writing. You were using the senses to give me a picture in my mind, especially the sense of touch/feeling. I remember getting itchy when I roll in the grass and getting brain freeze when drinking a cold drink. That's what great authors do - use the senses to help connect to a memory.
You asked what my memory is... my favouirte colour is orange. Orange reminds me of a flickering fire. When I visited family in England, it was snowing outside. We boiled a kettle on top of the black, metal fire box. Then we sat around the warm, crackling fire, drinking cups of steaming hot tea.
Hi Liam,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the work you have done and i think that your pepeha is telling us more about you. Good job Liam. Sophie